Polish x2 Winding Down

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-**Our conferences are coming to an end. I am rethinking how programmers are socializing.**
+**Our conferences are coming to an end. I am re-evaluating how we socialize.**
 
 Dear Handmade folks,
 
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-Warning: This is very dark stuff, and he torched our relationship along with Andrew's. Criticism is one thing but this is something else. Dozens of people inexplicably saw it before me and asking if I was okay. This was my 1-minute 30-second response to his half-hour video:
+Warning: This is very dark stuff, and he torched our relationship along with Andrew's. Criticism is one thing but this is something else. Dozens of people inexplicably saw it before me. This was my 1-minute 30-second response to his half-hour video:
 
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