diff --git a/content/english/about/index.md b/content/english/about/index.md
index 113045c..8916ac7 100644
--- a/content/english/about/index.md
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@@ -79,10 +79,10 @@ features:
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         content_class: "text-white"
       - title: "NASA Observer"
-        content: "Unofficial observer with no voting power. Hardware engineer at NASA. Given the current climate, involvement is anonymous."
+        content: "Unofficial observer role (no voting power.) Hardware engineer at NASA. Involvement is anonymous given the current climate."
         color: "#9B8EE8"                
         content_class: "text-white"
-    notice: "**Note:** The board is a volunteer role. Member's opinions are their own, not their employer's."
+    notice: "**Note:** The advisory board is comprised of volunteers. Member's opinions are their own, not their employer's."
 
   - title: "Morgan Rammell"
     title_class: "text-white"