diff --git a/content/english/boston/index.md b/content/english/boston/index.md
index 4b5933f..38f39a5 100644
--- a/content/english/boston/index.md
+++ b/content/english/boston/index.md
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ venue_address: "Columbia Point, Boston, MA 02125"
 
 # Coming Soon Section
 coming_soon_text: "Agenda Coming Soon"
-coming_soon_description: "We're working towards another amazing lineup of speakers."
+coming_soon_description: "We're assembling an incredible roster. Check back often."
 
 # Call to Action Buttons
 enable_newsletter: true
diff --git a/content/english/seattle/index.md b/content/english/seattle/index.md
index aba444c..f503134 100644
--- a/content/english/seattle/index.md
+++ b/content/english/seattle/index.md
@@ -53,6 +53,6 @@ previous_events:
 show_description: true
 ---
 
-Handmade Seattle our flagship conference for low-level programmers worldwide. Two days of talks, demos, and trade show. The third day is for in-person meetups outside the venue.
+Handmade Seattle is our flagship conference for low-level programmers worldwide. Two days of talks, demos and trade show. The third day is for opt-in hangouts across the city!
 
-We're famously hybrid - attend in person at the iconic Seattle Center or join remotely from anywhere in the world. All talks and demos are streamed professionally for all attendees, along with a [private](https://chat.handmadecities.com) chat server for live Q&A.
+We're famously hybrid - attend in person at the iconic Seattle Center or join remotely from anywhere you wish. All talks and demos are streamed professionally, along with a [private](https://chat.handmadecities.com) chat server for live Q&A.