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       - title: "An obligation to software quality"
-        content: "Our industry’s incentives erode ownership to extract rent from consumers. We’ve abandoned the love for our craft, the user's quality of experience, and their right to privacy."
+        content: "Our industry’s incentives destroy ownership to extract rent from customers. We’ve abandoned the love for our craft, the user's quality of experience, and their right to privacy."
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       - title: "Self-host wherever possible"
-        content: "Our services live in-house: we operate our own chat server and newsletter system. For payments, Stripe/PayPal ping our servers to process any orders ourselves."
+        content: "Services are in-house: we run our own chat server and newsletter system. For payments, Stripe and PayPal ping our servers to process orders ourselves."
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       - title: "Direct funding approach"
-        content: "We grow through obvious means, funded through users buying our own Handmade software. No investors."
+        content: "We grow through obvious means, funded by users purchasing our Handmade software. Zero investors."
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