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 ## The year that triggered the Handmade civil war
 
-Partly due to our keynote talk (timestamped), Handmade Cities [paid a price](/news/splitting-from-handmade-network/) for it. This was, however, [not the only reason](/news/hms-2024-clear-the-air/). In response to everything, we ratified a new advisory [board](/about).
+Partly due to our keynote talk (timestamped), Handmade Cities [paid a price](/news/splitting-from-handmade-network/) for it. This was, however, [not the only reason](/news/hms-2024-clear-the-air/).
 
-The Twitch stream is not available as individual recordings yet, but luckily our team archived a backup on YouTube.
+The Twitch stream is not available as individual recordings yet, but as you can see our team archived a backup on YouTube.