diff --git a/content/english/about/index.md b/content/english/about/index.md
index 31cb60b..fa7a666 100644
--- a/content/english/about/index.md
+++ b/content/english/about/index.md
@@ -27,8 +27,8 @@ features:
         content: "Essential services for our conferences and meetups are processed in-house. For example, our servers personally generate your conference ticket—removing spying middlemen like Ticketmaster."
         color: "#6B8EE8"        
         content_class: "text-white"
-      - title: "Direct funding philosophy"
-        content: "We grow through obvious means, funded primarily through ticket sales, followed by independent donations and fixed-rate job booth rentals: straightforward, mom-and-pop-style transactions."
+      - title: "Direct funding approach"
+        content: "We grow through obvious means, funded primarily through ticket sales, followed by independent donations and fixed-rate job booth rentals: straightforward, mom-and-pop transactions."
         color: "#60E3C4"                
         content_class: "text-white"
 
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ features:
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-    content: "[Abner](https://abner.page) is founder of Handmade Cities and the sole organizer for our conferences.<br><br>At a young age he was mentored by Kennedy Space Center on how they make software. After winning NASA’s Intern of the Year, Abner published an essay on their programming philosophy: featured in the [news](https://observer.com/2017/07/a-look-into-nasa-coding-philosophy-kennedy-space-center-programming/). He was subsequently promoted to launch control engineer.<br><br>Abner founded the [Handmade Network](https://handmade.network/), an online community learning to make quality software. He went on to work under Jonathan Blow for several years and finally Cyan Worlds to ship the [Myst remake](https://store.steampowered.com/app/1255560/Myst/).<br><br>Now in his early thirties, Abner's mounting concern of declining software standards—both ethical and technical—pushed him to run conferences and meetups full-time. (He still loves [programming](https://terminal.click) though.)"
+    content: "[Abner](https://abner.page) is founder of Handmade Cities and the sole organizer for our conferences.<br><br>At a young age he was mentored by Kennedy Space Center on how they make software. After winning NASA’s Intern of the Year, Abner penned an essay on their programming philosophy: featured in the [news](https://observer.com/2017/07/a-look-into-nasa-coding-philosophy-kennedy-space-center-programming/). He was subsequently promoted to launch control engineer.<br><br>Abner founded the [Handmade Network](https://handmade.network/), an online community learning to make quality software. He went on to work under Jonathan Blow for several years and finally Cyan Worlds to ship the [Myst remake](https://store.steampowered.com/app/1255560/Myst/).<br><br>Now in his early thirties, Abner's mounting concern of declining software standards—both ethical and technical—pushed him to run conferences and meetups full-time. (He still loves [programming](https://terminal.click) though.)"
 
   - title: "Our Advisory Board"
     title_class: "mb-20 text-center text-white"
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ features:
         color: "#9B8EE8"                
         content_class: "text-white"
       - title: "NASA Observer"
-        content: "Unofficial observer role (no voting power.) Hardware engineer at NASA. Involvement is anonymous given the current climate!"
+        content: "Unofficial observer role (no voting power.) Hardware engineer at NASA. Involvement is anonymous given the current climate."
         color: "#9B8EE8"                
         content_class: "text-white"
     notice: "**Note:** The advisory board is comprised of volunteers. Member's opinions are their own, not their employer's."
@@ -128,5 +128,5 @@ features:
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     section_class: "!pt-16 !pb-32 text-white"
-    content: "Mr. Perkins is our year round part-time assistant, usually plowing through our backlog of texts, emails and invoices."  
+    content: "Mr. Perkins is our year round part-time assistant, usually plowing through the backlog of texts, emails and invoices."  
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