From 0b95bbd26dbf354b17358e3e3849f4fff534c16f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: abnercoimbre <abnercoimbre@protonmail.com>
Date: Sun, 22 Jun 2025 18:12:27 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Continued polish x4 to 'Our Summer Update'

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 content/english/news/summer-update-2025.md | 4 ++--
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diff --git a/content/english/news/summer-update-2025.md b/content/english/news/summer-update-2025.md
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@@ -106,9 +106,9 @@ Anyone who made it this far deserves a cool video! I've set up a permalink at [t
 
 <div style="padding:56.25% 0 0 0;position:relative;"><iframe src="https://player.vimeo.com/video/1091637660?badge=0&amp;autopause=0&amp;player_id=0&amp;app_id=58479" frameborder="0" allow="autoplay; fullscreen; picture-in-picture; clipboard-write; encrypted-media; web-share" style="position:absolute;top:0;left:0;width:100%;height:100%;" title="Handmade is NOT Suckless"></iframe></div><script src="https://player.vimeo.com/api/player.js"></script>
 
-Over the years some new community members think [suckless](https://suckless.org) and Handmade are similar if not the same. Out of respect for both, I felt it was time to respond.
+Over the years some new community members often think [suckless](https://suckless.org) and Handmade are similar if not the same. Out of respect for both, I feel it's time to respond.
 
-The payoff is worth it if viewers watch patiently. I don't state bluntly what makes us different; my hope is the demos are crystal clear.
+The payoff is worth it if viewers watch patiently.
 
 *P.S. Don’t expect a deep philosophical breakdown. Instead, I casually compare their signature terminal software against my own: two real-world products from competing ideologies.*