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 title: "Our Summer Update"
 meta_title: ""
 description: "See where we stand halfway through the year"
-date: 2025-06-21T12:00:00Z
+date: 2025-06-22T12:00:00Z
 image: "/images/hmc/ocean.jpg"
 categories: ["Press Release"]
 author: "Abner Coimbre"
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ Catch up on our progress this year. Ticket discounts end soon!
 **Things to Discuss**
 
 - Conference Theme: Handmade at Home
-- Shutting Discord Down
+- Discord Off-Ramp
 - My Thoughts on AI
 - Bonus Video: Is Handmade like Suckless?
 
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ Someone reading this may be a worthy candidate and not even know it. Send an inf
 {{< button label="Submit a Talk" link="mailto:submissions@handmadecities.com" style="solid" >}}
 
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-### Shutting Discord Down 
+### Discord Off-Ramp 
 It's  not controversial to say I want to shut down Discord: everyone can sympathize for one reason or another! I’ve already left all servers except for my own [HMC](/discord) and [TC](https://terminal.click/discord).
 
 I’m moving us to [Revolt](https://revolt.chat) with an invite-only system. Here’s how it’ll work:
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ Revolt won't be foolproof of course. The host could go rogue and invite randos,
 
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 ### My Thoughts on AI
-All right, it's a stretch to call my take on artificial intelligence a "real" philosophy, but it is informed from personal study.
+All right, it's a stretch to call my take on artificial intelligence a "real" philosophy, but it is informed from careful study.
 
 I'm no longer a stranger to AI; I can effectively use the [cline](https://cline.bot) bot and deploy MCP servers. I review, quantize, and self-host open models. I stay on top of the "latest and greatest" and have vibe coders on speed dial (I keep dissenting opinions closer than friends.)
 
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ However, it fails at novel problems and isn’t practical for my systems program
 
 Let's imagine LLM agents become essential for true innovation: the top 5% of 'manual' coders are officially threatened! From what I observe at our in-person events, there remains the eternal craving for what's purely human.
 
-Even the True Believers conceded to me users will crave Handmade projects the same way people crave artisanal crafts, furniture or goods. They called this futuristic market fringe - I call it sustainable.
+Even True Believers conceded to me users will crave Handmade projects the same way people crave artisanal crafts, furniture or goods. They called this futuristic market fringe - I call it sustainable.
 
 **TL;DR:** I don't lose sleep over my craft disappearing. I lose sleep over the automation of mediocrity.
 
@@ -108,6 +108,8 @@ Anyone who made it this far deserves a cool video! I've set up a permalink at [t
 
 Over the years some new community members think [suckless](https://suckless.org) and Handmade are similar if not the same. Out of respect for both, I felt it was time to clarify.
 
+The payoff is worth it if viewers watch patiently.
+
 *P.S. Don’t expect a deep philosophical breakdown. Instead, I casually compare their signature terminal software against my own: two real-world products from different ideologies.*
 
 Your indie organizer,<br>Abner Coimbre