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-Handmade Seattle is our flagship conference for low-level programmers worldwide. Two days of talks, demos and trade show. The third day is for opt-in hangouts across the city!
+Handmade Seattle is our flagship conference for low-level programmers worldwide: two days packed with short impactful talks, demos and a trade show. The third day is for optional hangouts across the city!
 
-We're famously hybrid - attend in person at the iconic Seattle Center or join remotely from anywhere you wish. All talks and demos are streamed professionally, along with a [private](https://chat.handmadecities.com) chat server for live Q&A.
+We're famously hybrid - attend in person at the iconic Seattle Center or join remotely from anywhere. All talks and demos are streamed professionally, along with a [private](https://chat.handmadecities.com) chat server for live Q&A.