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@@ -106,10 +106,10 @@ Anyone who made it this far deserves a cool video! I've set up a permalink at [t
 
 <div style="padding:56.25% 0 0 0;position:relative;"><iframe src="https://player.vimeo.com/video/1091637660?badge=0&amp;autopause=0&amp;player_id=0&amp;app_id=58479" frameborder="0" allow="autoplay; fullscreen; picture-in-picture; clipboard-write; encrypted-media; web-share" style="position:absolute;top:0;left:0;width:100%;height:100%;" title="Handmade is NOT Suckless"></iframe></div><script src="https://player.vimeo.com/api/player.js"></script>
 
-Over the years some new community members think [suckless](https://suckless.org) and Handmade are similar if not the same. Out of respect for both, I felt it was time to clarify.
+Over the years some new community members think [suckless](https://suckless.org) and Handmade are similar if not the same. Out of respect for both, I felt it was time to respond.
 
-The payoff is worth it if viewers watch patiently.
+The payoff is worth it if viewers watch patiently. I don't state bluntly what makes us different; my hope is the demos are crystal clear.
 
-*P.S. Don’t expect a deep philosophical breakdown. Instead, I casually compare their signature terminal software against my own: two real-world products from different ideologies.*
+*P.S. Don’t expect a deep philosophical breakdown. Instead, I casually compare their signature terminal software against my own: two real-world products from competing ideologies.*
 
 Your indie organizer,<br>Abner Coimbre