From 5a738b7c68d9509a519dd2f7d2e1f26ca3582f53 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Ed L <beartechtalks@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 10 Sep 2022 20:22:43 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] fix: grammar, update command for dev mode

---
 src/components/navigation/right/MemberList.tsx | 12 ++++++------
 src/mobx/stores/Experiments.ts                 |  8 ++++----
 src/pages/settings/panes/Native.tsx            | 16 ++++++++++------
 src/pages/settings/server/Overview.tsx         |  8 ++++----
 4 files changed, 24 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/components/navigation/right/MemberList.tsx b/src/components/navigation/right/MemberList.tsx
index 1163fea5..ff4c9a21 100644
--- a/src/components/navigation/right/MemberList.tsx
+++ b/src/components/navigation/right/MemberList.tsx
@@ -118,20 +118,20 @@ export default function MemberList({
                     return (
                         <NoOomfie>
                             <div>
-                                Offline users temporarily disabled for this
-                                server, see issue{" "}
+                                Offline users have temporarily been disabled for
+                                larger servers - see{" "}
                                 <a
-                                    href="https://github.com/revoltchat/delta/issues/128"
+                                    href="https://github.com/revoltchat/backend/issues/178"
                                     target="_blank"
                                     rel="noreferrer">
-                                    #128
+                                    issue #178
                                 </a>{" "}
                                 for when this will be resolved.
                             </div>
                             <div>
-                                You may re-enable them in{" "}
+                                You may re-enable them{" "}
                                 <Link to="/settings/experiments">
-                                    <a>experiments</a>
+                                    <a>here</a>
                                 </Link>
                                 .
                             </div>
diff --git a/src/mobx/stores/Experiments.ts b/src/mobx/stores/Experiments.ts
index 23dd1751..63df9811 100644
--- a/src/mobx/stores/Experiments.ts
+++ b/src/mobx/stores/Experiments.ts
@@ -29,13 +29,13 @@ export const EXPERIMENTS: {
     [key in Experiment]: { title: string; description: string };
 } = {
     dummy: {
-        title: "Dummy Experiment",
-        description: "This is a dummy experiment.",
+        title: "Placeholder Experiment",
+        description: "This is a placeholder experiment.",
     },
     offline_users: {
         title: "Re-enable offline users in large servers (>10k members)",
         description:
-            "If you can take the performance hit (for example, you're on desktop), you can re-enable offline users for big servers such as Revolt Lounge.",
+            "If you can take the performance hit - for example, if you're on desktop - you can re-enable offline users for big servers such as the Revolt Lounge.",
     },
     plugins: {
         title: "Experimental Plugin API",
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ export const EXPERIMENTS: {
     picker: {
         title: "Custom Emoji",
         description:
-            "This will enable a work-in-progress emoji picker, custom emoji settings and reaction picker.",
+            "This will enable a work-in-progress emoji picker, custom emoji settings and a reaction picker.",
     },
 };
 
diff --git a/src/pages/settings/panes/Native.tsx b/src/pages/settings/panes/Native.tsx
index da02d777..ad6f620b 100644
--- a/src/pages/settings/panes/Native.tsx
+++ b/src/pages/settings/panes/Native.tsx
@@ -165,18 +165,22 @@ export function Native() {
                         title="I understand there's no going back."
                         description={
                             <>
-                                This will change the app to the 'dev' branch,
-                                instead loading the app from a local server on
-                                your machine.
+                                {
+                                    "This will change the app to the 'dev' branch, instead loading the app from a local server on your machine."
+                                }
                                 <br />
                                 <b>
-                                    Without a server running,{" "}
+                                    {"Without a server running, "}
                                     <span style={{ color: "var(--error)" }}>
-                                        the app will not load!
+                                        {"the app will not load!"}
                                     </span>
                                 </b>
                                 <br />
-                                <code>yarn dev --port 3001</code>
+                                {
+                                    "Make sure the app is available on port 3001 by running "
+                                }
+                                <code>{"yarn dev --port 3001 --host"}</code>
+                                {"."}
                             </>
                         }
                     />
diff --git a/src/pages/settings/server/Overview.tsx b/src/pages/settings/server/Overview.tsx
index 7dc56c39..3d8c026d 100644
--- a/src/pages/settings/server/Overview.tsx
+++ b/src/pages/settings/server/Overview.tsx
@@ -96,14 +96,14 @@ export const Overview = observer(({ server }: Props) => {
             <div className={styles.markdown}>
                 <Markdown size="24" />
                 <h5>
-                    Descriptions support Markdown formatting,{" "}
+                    {"Server descriptions support Markdown formatting. "}
                     <a
-                        href="https://developers.revolt.chat/markdown"
+                        href="https://support.revolt.chat/kb/interface/messages/formatting-your-messages"
                         target="_blank"
                         rel="noreferrer">
-                        learn more here
+                        {"Learn more here"}
                     </a>
-                    .
+                    {"."}
                 </h5>
             </div>
             <hr />